Reading 09

 

Reading 09

This weeks reading task was fairly self explanatory, we basically got two peers and we had to read there writings from the themes that they have done over the last couple of weeks and we also commented on both their introduction and conclusion statements to the chapters. It was important that we gave very critical feedback in order for them to realize their mistakes, and by doing this we had to properly read their pieces bit by bit to find any errors that could have been in the present in the pieces. What I noticed is that the two people where pretty much fine it was pretty easy to understand their chapters and I learnt a lot from them. The people did not really go wrong but just in some areas they may have need to re-write a section or two to make it sound more academic. In regards to my own piece I have seen the great feedback that I have gotten and now it is time to go and change a few things around in order for whoever is reading it they will be able to understand it a lot better and it will be written in a more unique academic form.